Sunday, 13 March 2011


This is my first draft of my music video, I have looked at pop conventions, and as I was hoping to make a conventional video, I have hopefully made my video obviously pop. I feel that this video could be improved if the transitions were smoother and the cuts weren't so harsh.

Untitled from ashleigh thomas on Vimeo.

I will now seek feedback from people from my target audience to see how my video could be improved.

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